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use the HTML link from photobucket.

Good job bud. My one suggestion which I think will help pull this piece together a lot and give it a better look.add some texture to all of those pages. Go find an old paper texture or something on a stock website, bring it into photoshop , turn it greyscale, adjust layers and play around with the layer blend modes etc. in my opinion everything needs texture, that pink is too clean. Give it a shot and repost the cover with textures.

iamdb said: Good job bud. My one suggestion which I think will help pull this piece together a lot and give it a better look.add some texture to all of those pages. Go find an old paper texture or something on a stock website, bring it into photoshop , turn it greyscale, adjust layers and play around with the layer blend modes etc. in my opinion everything needs texture, that pink is too clean. Give it a shot and repost the cover with textures.

I love the fly. You did a nice job. This is great advice.

thanks for the feedback everyone and iamdb that is great advise. Texture pulled it together. I will post pics of the final results after printing :)

its raw, but you definitely have an eye for design. keep doing what you're doing and if you like it enough think about going to school for it. you'd do well.